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glenndel: hi, nice blog, care to xchange links???
DoyleSoft: Cool blog.
Krishna: Hi, Jaywalking!
Realm: blog hop
Korner: helllo
Bits & Pieces: hi there
Kara: Pika! I'm glad I'm still writing, too. Howdy, Betty! So glad you're enjoying Japan!
Gold Prices Today: nice bravejoural.com
Betty: Hi Kara, I am here again...still alive and kicking. We are a bit settled here n Japan. Boy! I was looking your book here at the Naval base, it is not available. I may get some to your own site and order there. Boy! we are enjoying our stay here...so far so good. People are nice. My family went to visit Disneyland here in Tokyo, you might like to visit at http://www.skellytavels.info CIAO
Pika: been a while since I visited your blog... I'm glad youre still writing
Kara: Lila--Sure, I acd all the time. It's one of my favorite activities. Seriously ... what?
Lila: Do you like acdting?
Kara: Hello, Wow Gold. Welcome!
wow gold: hello,anybody home?nice journal website!
Kara: Thanks for stopping by, Krishna!
Krishna: Hi,Blog hopping!Love your site!!
Kara: No worries, Carla. I got it three times!
Carla Cassidy: Karen, I just tried to post a message but I must have typed in the letters in the black box a hundred times and it wouldn't go! I'm hoping you get this okay!
Kara: Hey, Kris. Same to you.
Kris: Hi Kara! Happy Belated Valentine's Day!
Kara: Thanks, Heart! Back at ya.
Heart: happy valentines day
Kara: Kris--I'm there!
Kris: Hi Kara! Happy Weekend! I got a little something for you at my place, please stop by when you get a chance!!
Kara: Hi, GK, glad you hopped my way!
GK: happy weekend...blog hopping here
Kara: Hi, Linda.
LINDA: HELLO
Kara: Amelia--If I buy a lot of food, you-know-who just eats it faster! Betty--Japan! Wow!
betty: Hi Kara, I never visit here again. Happy New Year. We got busy- we will be moving to Japan
amelia: glad you liked the gifts. To have food you need to buy a lot of food as well as go to the store. It seems to work for me.
robin: hey, sorry for the cheeky post, but i am trying to draw as much attention to my cancer charity fundraising page as i can - come by and have a look - loads of auctions going on to raise funds. dont forget to tag me and sign the guestmap :)
Kara: Happy New Year back to all of you, a bit belated! My tags don't seem to show up.
Kris: Happy New Year Kara!!
moni: HAPPY NEW YEAR KARA
Clare: Cool site! Pretty funny too! Happy Holidays!
moni: MERRY CHRISTMAS KARA!
GK: happy weekend
Kara: hey, Betty! Glad your house didn't sink! That would be a major bummer.
Betty Skelly: Hi Kara, been awhile I did not come here. I was busy, we went back to FL again and we got lots of sunshine. We missed the flood here in Northwest but I am thankful that our house did not sunk. We live in a hill and the house was built 1 foot up the ground. I called my friend if we have flood but then it is only at the bridge about 2 miles away from my home. Glad everything went ok. How are you? Got a new book working again huh! cool!
Garf: care to exchange link?
Kara: Hey, Betty! Good to see you. I gotta have the sunshine or I get very depressed!
Betty Skelly: Hi Kara, it is been awhile I did not visit you here but I was trying to read an updates. Happy thanksgiving and wished you have a wonderful time in CA. Wished I can get some sunshine. We are pretty much gloomy here.
Kara: Thanks, J! The wordmeter can be found at zokuto.com. Usually I make it a "Page-O-Meter."
J: I like the blog of yours. It's cool how u r keeping track of what u r writing. And I think that CATCH OF THE DAY Word-OMeter is cool.
Kris: Hi Kara! Just stopping by to say hello and to catch up on you. I'll be back again soon@
Kara: Thanks, Colorguard!
CMW Colorguard: Congrats on JOTW!
ANGEL: HELLO
Kara: Moni, Happy Belated Halloween to you, too! And thanks, Holly and Kris!
Kris: Hey Kara! CONGRATS on winning JOTW! I really enjoy your journal and I'm glad that you are being recognized!!

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Sunday, July 1st 2007

8:46 PM

Analyzing "Pirates"

  • Where did I walk/ride? To Norma's and Carnival, 5107 steps
  • Treasures found: 1 dime and 11 pennies (seven of them in one spot)
  • Affirmation of the Day: I am relaxed and secure about the future

I am preparing a workshop for the national conference in GULP about ten days.  It's on using the three-act structure of screenwriting for writing novels.  Part of what I'm doing is analyzing a popular movie for where the plot points fall and using that as a structure for building a novel.

I can't believe how tightly written "Pirates of the Caribbean" (the original) is.  There is a plot turn, a twist, a secret revealed on almost every page.  There is also conflict on every page.  This has been a real learning experience for me, never mind the workshop!

In addition to that little exercise (which took several hours) I built a cover for one of Rob's books, I planted some more herbs, and I OF COURSE ate breakfast at Norma's.  I also made an interesting wild rice salad for dinner with toasted nuts, bits of dried fruit, and a bit of orange juice.  It turned out pretty tasty--something a little different for a warm summer night.

See you next week,
Kara

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